Today
Your overview has no numbers. Your details include only the important numbers.
Hello
1 minLet us connect Days 1 and 2 to Day 3.
Overview or detail?
LookLook at the tourists chart. It is the same chart as Day 2.
| City | 2018 | 2022 |
|---|---|---|
| Paris | 200 | 180 |
| Rome | 150 | 210 |
| Berlin | 90 | 170 |
1. Overall, Rome overtook Paris, while Berlin grew from the lowest start.
2. In 2018 Paris stood at 200 thousand.
Choose
3 rulesDo not use every number. Choose only the important ones.
Compare
WordsWrite naturally. Do not just list the numbers.
Say it
Numbers
Past + about2018 is in the past, so use the past tense.
Which details?
CoreText A lists the numbers. Text B compares them.
A In 2018 Paris was 200, Rome 150, Berlin 90. In 2022 Paris 180, Rome 210, Berlin 170.
B In 2018 Paris stood at 200, compared to 150 in Rome and 90 in Berlin. By 2022 Rome rose to 210 and overtook Paris, while Berlin almost doubled to 170.
We write 1
With teacherLet us write about the 2018 start together.
| 2018 | Paris | Rome | Berlin |
|---|---|---|---|
| Thousands | 200 | 150 | 90 |
We write 2
ChangeNow write about the 2022 change. Type one sentence yourself.
| 2022 | Paris | Rome | Berlin |
|---|---|---|---|
| Thousands | 180 | 210 | 170 |
You write
Full Task 1 12:00Use the homework chart from Day 1. Write a full report.
| Country | 2010 | 2020 |
|---|---|---|
| Japan | 7 hours | 5 hours |
| Germany | 6 hours | 6 hours |
| Brazil | 6 hours | 9 hours |
Write 4 parts: 1. Introduction, 2. Overview with no numbers, 3. 2010 details, 4. 2020 details. Write about 150 words. Use ‘while’ once.
Press Start, then write your report.
Check + list
1 fixChoose one fix to focus on.
| My sentence | Better | My try |
|---|---|---|
| Rome has risen to 210. | Rome rose to 210. | Paris fell to 180. |
Done Annisa
You compared the data, you did not just list it. Your full Task 1 is ready.