Today
P Point
E Evidence
E Explain
L Link
Today we use only Q1. Write one paragraph of 4 to 5 lines. You will use PEEL again from Day 10.
1 Look
2 Choose / Type
3 Check
4 Complete
Questions: Adapted for class from IELTS Liz 100 Essay Questions and British Council Take IELTS Writing. Free classroom use.
Hello
1 minFrom your map to the middle of your essay.
Q1: Online learning is better than classroom learning. Your thesis: I disagree, flexibility is real but interaction matters more.
I disagree. While online learning offers flexibility, it weakens interaction, so classrooms stay better.
PEEL?
LookPEEL has 4 jobs.
What is ‘P’?
What is ‘L’?
Why one?
LookDepth is better than a list.
List: Flexible. Cheap. Fun. No depth.
PEEL: Flexibility. For example, rewatch a lesson. This helps at own pace. Even so, not enough alone.
PEEL: Flexibility. For example, rewatch a lesson. This helps at own pace. Even so, not enough alone.
Which is better?
PEEL is for all writing. You will use it again from Day 10.
Label it
Look4 lines, but only 1 idea.
P One clear advantage of online learning is flexibility.
E For example, recorded lessons can be watched again after class.
E This repeated access helps students review hard points at their own pace.
L Even so, this benefit alone does not make online learning better overall.
E For example, recorded lessons can be watched again after class.
E This repeated access helps students review hard points at their own pace.
L Even so, this benefit alone does not make online learning better overall.
How many ideas are there?
What does ‘L’ do?
Point
TypeWrite one clear sentence.
One clear advantage of online learning is .
Which is a good Point?
Say it aloud
Evidence
Show itGive an example with ‘For example’.
For example, .
Which is good evidence?
Say it aloud
Explain Link
So whatExplain why it matters and link back.
This .
, this alone does not make online better overall.
Say it aloud
Which is good?
LookWhich paragraph is thin and which is deep?
A Flexibility is good. It is useful. Students like it. It helps many people.
B One advantage is flexibility. For example, lessons can be rewatched. This helps at own pace. Even so, not enough alone to beat live interaction.
Which is good?
Why is it better?
We write PEEL
With teacherLet us write your PEEL paragraph together. Take 6 minutes.
Q1 Body 1: Show the other side fairly, then limit it. Point is flexibility.
One clear advantage of online learning is flexibility. For example, recorded lessons can be watched again after class. This repeated access helps students review hard points at their own pace without slowing others. Even so, this benefit alone does not make online learning better overall.
You write PEEL
You do 8:00Now write by yourself. Take 8 minutes.
Q1 Body 2: Your side. Weak interaction. Or Q2 homework builds habits.
Write one paragraph of 4 to 5 lines. Use ‘For example’ and ‘Even so’ or ‘Therefore’.
Press Start, then write your paragraph.
1 hard3 ok5 clear
Homework: Fix your PEEL paragraph, then write 5 lines using ‘One advantage is’, ‘For example’, ‘This means’, ‘Even so’ and ‘Therefore’.
One serious drawback of online learning is weak student interaction. For instance, students cannot ask quick questions face to face. This makes discussion slower and less natural, and it can reduce motivation. Therefore, live classrooms remain more effective for learning together.
Done Annisa
One idea, explained deeply. PEEL ready for all writing.
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