Today
Claim: I argue that
Counter: Admittedly
Answer: However
Today we use only Q1. Write one paragraph of 5 to 6 sentences: the same PEEL plus a counter.
1 Look
2 Choose / Type
3 Check
4 Complete
Frames: Standard argument moves following Purdue OWL. Questions from IELTS Liz and British Council. Free use.
Hello
1 minFrom outline to paragraph.
Q1: Online learning is more effective. Your Day 10 outline: argue that classrooms are better, flexibility, interaction.
Thesis: I argue that classrooms are better. Body 1: flexibility. Body 2: interaction. End: restate.
3 jobs
LookA claim, proof and a counter.
What happens with no counter?
What does a fair counter plus an answer give?
Model: claim is I argue that plus 2 reasons. Support is For instance plus This means. Counter is Admittedly plus However plus Therefore.
Starters
WordsPut a comma after the starter.
, online study offers flexibility.
online study offers flexibility, interaction matters more.
Model: Admittedly, online study offers flexibility. While it is true that online study offers flexibility, interaction matters more.
Label it
LookWrite 5 lines with 1 proof.
1 One reason classroom learning remains better is stronger interaction.
2 For instance, students cannot ask quick questions face to face online.
3 This slower exchange reduces motivation and depth in discussion.
4 Admittedly, online study offers real flexibility for busy learners.
5 However, flexibility alone cannot replace live discussion, so classrooms stay better.
2 For instance, students cannot ask quick questions face to face online.
3 This slower exchange reduces motivation and depth in discussion.
4 Admittedly, online study offers real flexibility for busy learners.
5 However, flexibility alone cannot replace live discussion, so classrooms stay better.
Which line is the claim?
Which lines are the counter plus answer?
Model labels: claim is 1. Support is 2 and 3. Counter plus answer is 4 and 5. Five lines, one idea proved fairly.
Claim
TypePromise proof in your claim.
I classrooms are better.
interaction is stronger.
Say it aloud
Support
Prove itGive a fact plus the ‘so what’.
For instance, .
This .
Say it aloud
Counter back
Fair, then firmBe fair first, win last.
, online study offers real flexibility.
, flexibility alone cannot replace live discussion.
Model: Admittedly, online study offers real flexibility. However, flexibility alone cannot replace live discussion.
Which wins?
LookFlat or fair?
A Classrooms are better. Interaction is good. Students like teachers.
B I argue that classrooms are better because interaction is stronger. Admittedly, online study offers flexibility. However, it cannot replace live discussion.
Which is stronger?
Why is it stronger?
We write it
With teacherLet us write it together. Take 5 minutes.
Q1 Body 2: your side plus fair counter. Claim is interaction.
I argue that classroom learning is more effective because interaction is stronger. For instance, students cannot ask quick questions face to face online. This slower exchange reduces motivation and depth. Admittedly, online study offers real flexibility for busy learners. However, flexibility alone cannot replace live discussion, so classrooms stay better.
You argue it
You do 7:00Now write by yourself. Take 7 minutes.
Same Q1, fresh words. Or Q2 short homework. Claim plus counter in 5 to 6 lines.
Press Start, then write your paragraph.
1 weak3 ok5 strong
Homework: Fix your paragraph, then write 5 lines using ‘Admittedly’, ‘While it is true that’, ‘However’, ‘Therefore’ and ‘I argue that’.
While it is true that online study offers flexibility for busy learners, I argue that classroom learning is more effective because interaction is stronger. For instance, quick face-to-face questions keep discussion lively. This lively exchange builds motivation. However, flexibility alone cannot replace it, so classrooms remain better.
Done Annisa
Your counter is fair and your answer is firm. Your argument is ready.
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